The New And Improved Story

After redrafting our initial story we had a new outline of what our film opening would be. The newer version of our story was this: a young gambler is in a poker game which he ends up winning. He then leaves but is killed by a masked man in his home as his earnings are stolen from him. It becomes clear that the killer is in fact the previous loser of the poker game who had left before the game was finished and is also working with his partner who is the hired driver.

-  Sharmarke.